Evening Ashley,As I suspected, you're a bright student, who writes engagingly about film and storytelling as expressed through production design etc... If only you'd actually represented yourself as positively during the actual project! I express this, not as a nag, but rather as an endorsement of your brain and my desire to see you using it always! ;)Now - in terms of your Harvard referencing, in the brackets that follow a quote, you only need the surname, so like this (Milne 2010).Keep them coming!
I'm only seeing this now and yes I figured out about the referencing half way through the reviews.thanks for the advice Phil! :)